How I am going to revised my paper

When revising the paper I would have to focus on the topic. My First draft was going from person to person .On my revised draft will concentrated on lyte's commencenment address of 1886. I will re-read the document and take some ideas out of document . Then I would explain how we are benefiting from it and why important today. I will be using the sample paper you gave us to use on the mindmap. I will explain lyte's commencement address of 1886 in detail.